Each human being is different from one to another, and that difference makes the humankind interesting. You can meet people with different likes, dislikes, interests, experiences and so on. As you can see every person is different, and so am I, there are some relevant facts about me that make me different. Aspects like videogames, sports, and music differs me from the rest of the people.
Videogames have been a huge influence for me since I was a child. Everything started with the Nintendo NES (Nintendo Entertainment System), with this and the subsequent videogames that I have owned, my interest for the English language has increased, in fact, it was a determining reason for entering to the major.
I have always loved some sports. There is not anything more fun than practicing a sport, in fact I have practiced a huge number of sports, such as: basketball, chess, dominoes, football, football tennis, footvolley, skating, soccer, swimming, and also I have done gymnastics and yoga. The majority of them make me feel happy, they release the stress and improve my health. For example I have been skating (inline skates) almost for a year, and I am entirely delighted.
Music makes the difference. I have not meet anyone who does not like to listen to music, music is something intangible but at the same time some kind of real thing that you can perceive not only with your ears, but with your body. I used to listen to just certain kind of music, actually I did not like to listen to Mexican music. Nowadays I have changed and I listen to almost every kind of music.
As you can see some important and particular situations, such as videogames, music, and sports have modified my character, interests and behavior. These things make me different. Now you know some lines of this book called Carlos, if you want to know more about me keep me on track with my further essays.
I think your essay is very good, and clear. just one aspect is to try to connect the paragraphs, because they seem to be individual, so add some phrases at start a paragrph, like, other important thing, or, another activity i like.
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