It was like a century ago when all of this started, well I was exaggerating just a little bit. In fact, my evolution in electronic literacy started in 2004 when I finally got access in my house to a dial-up Internet connection. The connection was the slowest connection ever, but in that time having access to Internet was the greatest thing you could ever imagine. My beginning in electronic literacy, the influence of L2, and my expectations in the future will be developed.
My beginning in electronic literacy started at the end of 2004. In that year I signed up in some forums related to technology and communications. I was a regular user, in fact I published a lot of interesting things and also I tried to help every user solving their doubts or questions. Some of these forum had also chat rooms, but I was not as active as I was in the forums. It was like a waste of time dealing with people who only entered looking for sex.
Electronic literacy and basically Internet have promoted a lot the influence of L2. Due to the high spread of the English language, a lot of social networks, chat rooms, discussion boards and video games have helped me with my English skills. Surfing the Internet you discover a lot of amazing things, but sometimes you do not understand all that information, however you use all of your resources to figure out that information.
The last aspect to talk about is my expectations in electronic literacy. Nowadays with the spread of information through the Internet, it is easier to find important websites related to literacy, education, courses, research, etc. With this, students, teachers and essentially every Internet user can find or get important information or content, and that is what I want. I want that every human being get access to Internet and as a consequence to that huge web of information.
As you can see, my beginning in electronic literacy, the influence obtained of L2, and my expectations are important aspects to me. Someone else might disagree with me, or at least he/she can agree in some perspectives, this is because we have not passed through the same thing and we can differ in our thoughts. But what about you, what can you tell me about your electronic literacy?
the first paragraph, i mean the introduction i think that you need to write more details about the essay not the beginning, because i saw that you wrote about your beginning but the essay is about what? well i think that.
ResponderEliminarAlso i think that you need more supporting details in the body, although your idea is clear, but i think that you could add more details about you experiences in electronic literacy.
it is interesting and clear!
FOR ME the fisrt paragraph is missing something, mmm it really does not shows that your essay is going to be about your development in literacy. it seems about just your beginning using it.
ResponderEliminarYou're missing a link from the second paragraoh to the third one. It would be better if you write something else, so the chage from a paragraph to the next one will sound natural.
In the third paragraph you should think about more supporting details.
Maybe in the fourth paragraph you should write expectation but more about yourself..like more personal.
You need more facts or supporting details on your conclusion "mugrillo".
I really like that your ideas are very clear...keep them on your essays
Atte: Carito